IELTS Writing Task 2 — Teacher Feedback

The international organisation should be responsible for addressing environmental issues rather than a single country. In my opinion i agree with this statement due to several reasons.

On the one hand, some might believe that environment problems are national governments responsibility due to some potential foundations. First, international can not demand or force a country to follow the law they implemented if they do not willing to. These global agency can only ask for cooperation. In fact, even one of the largest global group like The United Nations can only send documents to inquire about coordination from powerful countries including China, the USA and Vietnam without any means of compelling member states to act. Furthermore, there is no one size fits for all policy that can adapt to many countries due to the differences in geography and economy of different countries. If the intergovernmental organisation demand every countries to reduced the same amount of greenhouse gasses, it would be unfair for smaller countries that produce less gases and the fact that it will effect badly to the economy of these smaller countries.

On the other hand, in order to address the environment issue need a international organisation to stand up and take the responsibility because environmental problem is not a local problem but a global one and a single country can not make barely any difference to cure this crisis. Primarily, local pollution can affect badly to the whole ecosystem around the world and make consequences that irreversible. In fact, when factories in a single countrie emits greenhouse gasses it can contribute to the global problems and then accelerate the speed of many nature phenomenon such as melting glacier that rise the sea level posing threat to countries that have city lying under the sea level. Furthermore, fighting against climate change is not a thing that a individual country can possible do. In order to shift the climate trend need many countries that willing to sacrifice a part of their benefit for the earth. For example, only a small countries like Vietnam decided to cut down their industrial branch to become a green countries and big nation like China continue to release tons of carbon dioxide to the nature it will not make a difference.